Appositives

Appositives

Commas

Commas can easily cause confusion. There are specific rules for them, and their placement can make a significant difference in the meaning of a sentence. Whether prolific or sadly lacking, commas can create challenges for writers.

Today I want to cover just one comma rule: how they’re used with appositives.

An appositive is a noun or noun phrase used to further explain, identify or rename the noun directly beside it. It can be at the beginning, the end, or the middle of a sentence. In each case, a comma or commas should be used to separate the appositive from the rest of the sentence.

Examples:

  • In the middle of a sentence
    My car, a red Holden, was stolen last week.
    The phrase, “a red Holden”, is an appositive.
  • At the end of a sentence
    He lived in Raglan, a township on the west coast of New Zealand.
  • At the beginning of a sentence
    An excellent cook, Martha baked every Tuesday.

More examples:

  • The team appreciates any sports equipment, bats, balls and wickets, that can be donated via the school.
  • The bird, a fat wood pigeon, was often seen down at Butler Park.

Notice how the appositives are rearranged and change in these sentences, depending on order and commas:

  • Monica, a lovely waitress, served us at our table.
  • A lovely waitress, Monica, served us at our table.
  • A lovely waitress, Monica served us at our table.
  • We were served at our table by Monica, a lovely waitress.
  • We were served at our table by a lovely waitress, Monica.

Sometimes a dash will be used instead of a comma. Dashes can be useful when the appositive itself contains a comma.

  • Example:
    He lived in Raglan – a township on the west coast of New Zealand.

Restrictive or Non-Restrictive Appositives

In the previous examples, where they’re renaming, explaining or identifying, the appositives are non-restrictive and require a comma. Restrictive appositives are essential to the meaning of a sentence and are not set off by commas.

Example:

  • My sister, Louise, came with me.

“Louise” is written here as a non-restrictive appositive, where the writer has only one sister: Louise.

If the writer had more than one sister, the sentence should be written: “My sister Louise came with me”. In the second sentence, “Louise” is important to the meaning of the sentence and therefore a restrictive appositive not requiring any commas.

In short, non-restrictive appositives, clauses or phrases need extra commas – restrictive ones do not.

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Apostrophes and their Correct Usage

Apostrophes

Apostrophes

Apostrophes are little punctuation marks that are so often misused. Let’s look at seven purposes.

1. To indicate a missing letter or letters

A contraction is a word where two words are combined into one. One or more letters (and sounds) are dropped and these are indicated by the use of an apostrophe. Examples of these include:

You’re = you are
I’m = I am
We’ll – we will

 

2. To indicate possession

When something belongs to someone it can be written as: Mary’s bike, or Peter’s boots, or the cat’s whiskers. However, when the pronoun it is used, the apostrophe is omitted. Just as with hers, ours and yours. An example of this: Mary gave the cat its saucer of milk.

It is used in different places for singular and plural possessive cases. The apostrophe is placed before the ‘s’ in singular possessive cases (the cat’s milk) and after the ‘s’ in plural possessive cases (the cats’ milk). Another example of these would be the boy’s bike (one boy) and the boys’ bikes (more than one boy). And another: the bosses’ orders.

Some possessive uses are a little different:
When the possessor is plural, but does not end with an ‘s’, e.g. women, men, children, the apostrophe comes before the ‘s’: women’s, men’s, children’s.

 

3. To indicate time or quantity

One year’s time, four weeks’ notice, or five dollars’ worth. However, note: two days late.

 

4. To indicate the omission of figures in dates.

In the year of ’69.

5. To indicate the omission of letters

This can be used as well in old-fashioned English where letters are dropped indicating a different pronunciation.

I s’pose if he came ‘ere, we would expect ‘im to have a membership.

 

6. To indicate the plural of letters

The n’s and h’s on this old typewriter look the same.

If apostrophes were not used when referring to a’s, i’s and u’s, some confusion could be caused.

 

7. To indicate the plural of words

If’s, but’s and maybe’s

One exception is: dos and don’ts, where style guides and usage books don’t agree. Some prefer do’s and don’t’s.

Grammar Girl recommends, “Unless your editor wishes otherwise, if you write books, spell it dos and don’ts; and if you write for newspapers, magazines, or the Web, spell it do’s and don’ts. If you’re writing for yourself, spell it any way you want.”

 

Evolution of the Apostrophe

Over time, apostrophe use has changed. Where once it was normal to use an apostrophe when writing abbreviations and plural dates, such as CD’s and 1930’s, it is now customary to omit the apostrophe (except in America, where different conventions apply).

 

Apostrophes in Plural Names

Another confusing area is with possessive plural names that end with ‘s’. Is it more correct to write Jones’ or Jones’s; St James’ Church, St James’s Church, or even St James Church?

Although this is very much a style issue and there are no hard and fast rules, generally you can follow these guidelines:

Names ending in ‘s’ require an apostrophe and second ‘s’ after the name:

  • Ross’s car
  • Jim Collins’s book

With names from the ancient world, there is no extra ‘s’:

  • Achilles’ heel

If the name ends with an “iz” sound, an exception is made:

  • Moses’ staff

And an exception is always made for Jesus:

  • Jesus’ parables

With names such as St James’ Hospital, it becomes a brand issue, and if they choose to be known as St James Hospital, so be it. Other well-known examples of brands that omit the apostrophe include Deloittes and Harrods.

 

Sources used for reference:

Eats, Shoots and Leaves – Lynne Truss
Fit to Print – Janet Hughes & Derek Wallace
Grammar Girl: www.quickanddirtytips.com

 

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Why Use a Proofreader? Does it Really Matter?

Need a proofreader? – www.jyila.co.nzI was looking for an excuse not to ride the rollercoaster with my family when I came across this sign. (Please excuse the poor photography.) Note the use of “there” instead of “their” in the eighth bullet point. Note also in the next bullet point, they’ve written “effects” instead of “affects”. Easily confused words in both cases, but also easily avoided errors if they’d bothered to use a proofreader.

Unreasonable conclusion

I started to think, if people are sloppy with their spelling, punctuation and grammar, chances are they might be sloppy about other things as well! If their public image is not important to them, what are their safety policies like?

No matter how irrational my thought processes might be, I had found my excuse.

People Will Form Impressions About You Based on Your Writing

I’ve read that the average time people take to form a first impression about someone is just seven seconds. How crazy is that? But it’s true. People form opinions about us based on, in many cases, just our appearance. Is it worth risking your public forming a negative opinion about you solely based on errors in your writing? In your advertising, signwriting, newsletters, website, and other communications, do yourself a favour and present your brand well. The cost of ensuring your work is proofread accurately is far less than the loss of potential clients.

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